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[征文作品] 【色城2010文心雕龙】【未婚妻雪儿的夏天】(全)(25号)

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仔仔细细的看完了楼主的文章,感觉结构设计的很严谨,语言精炼,由此可以看出楼主的语言运用能力极强,细节描写的生动逼真,看到了让人感觉身临其境,特别是对雪儿的描写,让人一看便跃然纸上,特别是对雪儿在旅馆搞的3P、人物的细节描写和心理进行细致入微的描写,刻画,会使情节更加生动,人物更加逼真,让人兴奋不已,谢谢楼主了的佳文。
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