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[禁忌之恋] 【人间归途（母子复仇）】

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应该是母子纯爱文，儿子性格强势固执母亲性格柔软温柔，两人合适而且有共同目标，剧情合理，对于母子二人捅破窗户纸的描写也特别有真实感。希望后续能写两人doing的情节，能细致点，把两人的内心心理描写写得细致一点，能让读者身临其境，有沉浸感。
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